Script-Twitch (old)

Scene-Introduction of location: Abandoned flats.

Sound- Eerie and ominous sound in background.

2.Cut

Wide shot of Simon getting beaten up by parents with father hitting him with a baseball bat.
Dialoge: mum – useless,mistake, accident we hate you, you waste of space.. Dad – we don’t love you, we tried to leave you behind you basted, just leave!
Simon: Sounds of pain. “ohh! Ahh!!”
SFX: Swinging sound followed by a loud thump when the bat hits he’s head.

3.Cut

Medium shot of boy crying against a wall.
Dialoge: I will get even, I will show you!
Sound: Crying sound “aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!”

4.Cut
Crane shot of people walking through high street with Simon watching from above.
Sound: lots of people talking, car sounds.

5.Cut
Shot of Simon on computer, the camera is angled from the side.
Sound- Sound of typing at a fast pace. Emphasises interest in technology and isolation.
As weapons show up on the computer screen a worrying and sad soundtrack enters.
6.Cut
Zoom in of Computer screen showing tabs.
Worrying soundtrack continues in background.

8.Cut
Close up of face, he’s face shows an expression of acknowledgement.

9. Cut

Close up continues. Imges of weapons appear around him.

Worrying music becomes faster and deeper.

Contempaltion

10.Cut

Cuts to a dark and damp room.
Superimposition- Camcorder like, REC.

Simon: “Kill 9!”

Girl tied on Bed struggling to get free.
Girl: “grunts”
Deep worrying sound continues in the background.

11.Cut
Wide shot of Simon Sharpening menacing Knife.

SFX: Metal scraping against metal

Soundtarck builds up in Speed.

12.Cut

Loose frame of girl looking towards Simon as Camera with knife in front of him camera gets closer to girl. Point of View.

Soundtrack gets louder and louder as he gets closer.

13.Cut
Close up of Knife as he walks towards her.
Girl: “Stay away from me, somebody help!!!!”
Sound bulds up to a chrasendo.

14.Cut
Walking along with knife only hand holding knife show
Girl: “Help!! Help!!”
Chrasendo holds.

15.Cut
High angle Point of view shot of he’s feet showing as well as he’s hand with the knife showing.
Sound-Slow paced footsteps.
Chrasendo holds.

16.Cut
Wide Shot of Simon approaching the girl from the side abd preparing to stab her.

Sound reaches highest point and holds.

You can see the rusted tools against the wall and really get a sense of location.